war

i always used to wonder about the two voice ,i feel like mine, but they always argue..

What to choose,
when you cant ignore,
but the decision is tough,
when its war between mind and heart.
You play the debate,
between both warriors,
but both warriors are strong,
and debate is long.
One says fiction,
other says practical.
One says try,
other says i want to cry.
One says smile,
other says there's no reason then why?
The arguement will never stop,
your destiny depends on what you choose-out.
When you finally know,
dont hesitate,
and just give it a shot!

Author's Note

i think it is a familiar situation with you all. it is very hard to choose, specialy when decision is on something important.
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Reviews

[Happy hours]

totally agree with you....nicely penned :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot.

[Surya pradha]

agree with your note. another poem that i can relate to. nice work!

[ayesha gupta]

thankyou so much.

[Nikki]

Delicate subject, the heart feels what the mind cannot and the mind sees what the heart cannot. The logic and the desire intertwine well. Pros and cons seem indifferent when it is something that can shape so much.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for writing review. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

the classic mind v/s heart. it really is painful.
beautiful poem.
needs a little editing.
eg. "The argue will never stop" I THINK it should be argument instead of argue.
anyways, i liked it!!!
:)

[ayesha gupta]

yep. it suits more. thanks for correction.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome.....!!! :) :)

[Prabha Salimath]

Yes ofcourse everyone on this earth ( who have thinking for very least ) face this I agree with this Ayesha and there is a war within ourself for everything. Nicely written I loved it.
If you read my OF MIND AND HEART you see how I see them.

[ayesha gupta]

thanx a lot for writing review. the next thing i m going to do is reading that poem. :-)

[Prabha Salimath]

you are welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

I was told war is part of our nature. With old age. I believe it is true. I like how you twist the words to make your point. A poem to create conversation with many answers. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ayesha gupta]

i m glad you liked it, my friend.:-)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Mayank]

whatever you gut says and if it's morally right, go with it.

[ayesha gupta]

true mayank.. whatever we choose should be morally right. thanks for sharing nice thoughts and reviewing my poem.

[stars are far]

oh yes that is really one of the hardest times you can pass through, and until now i know that my heart is always the one whom i listen to, though i know that my mind is the one who is right.. so yeah ..follow your mind.. that was well expressed..great work :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for reading my poem and writing such a nice review. :-)

[Avinash]

You need to go with your gut feeling at times. How you do it is more important than the failure or success of it. A good decision is always a tough decision. A very intense writing I will say and beautifully crafted.

[ayesha gupta]

yep. actually m doing prep for medical entrance exam..and feeling a bit low. my heart and mind plays war in such critical situation. lol. thanx for advice.

[Avinash]

My best wishes. Your dreams are more important than any person.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks. :-)