your smile

we always have some friends who doesnt feel that excited and happy like us. this is dedicated for all those whose smile matters for their loved ones.

Why you are so upset? so depressed? so hurt?
It seems your eyes havent dreamt since long.
You are so dark, what you are hiding in your heart?
You looked like hurt by someone so deep.
Your eyes dont water, but the pain is crystal-clear.
I do not know, what you went through,
but its already past, its over dear.
Say something..cry, yell in grief!
dont hold these feelings inside deep.
I know you're strong, not someone weak,
your smile is my dream, make it real for me please.

Author's Note

feeling like doing someone for that depressed person. so, i wrote this. i hope you like it.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good words for a friend who could use them. Sometime a positive voice and friend near can help. I like the want to create hope and smile again. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ayesha gupta]

thanx so much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[hardeep sabharwal]

an emotional work, some lines are very nice, a good read :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanx a lot, sir. your appreciation matters a lot to me. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

The second line is absolutely beautiful. It says so much with so little.

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for review. :)