My Bleeding Heart

sometimes best-friend can be back-stabber

my heart is bleeding,
see what you have done!
i though you are,
my person, my love,
i trusted you, you know?
you had broken my trust,
so please leave me,
with a bleeding heart.
that one, which you stabbed,
with your words,
now see me losing,
my tears , my wound.
i dont know what had happened to you,
i know you were never like this.
now the sky is fallin',
over my world,
you got me paralyzing,
with all you have done.
you can never repair,
the things you have done,
so let me die inside,
with a bleeding heart.

Author's Note

it reminds me of julius ceaser's death. his friends stabbed him. likewise there are people, who stab with words..it hurts.
plz do write reviews.

Reviews

[The Black Warrior]

This beautifully written...Words can hurt more than a punch... for the physical pain will ease but the pain of the hurt is hard to heal..."If you say that you love me, then prove it not just say it" words and actions go hand in hand, they need both to make it work. It is not enough to say it not show it and same with showing love and not saying it.

Great Job. Thank you for sharing!

Suk

[ayesha gupta]

thanx suk. :) as i m learing to write poem, i really need reviewers like you who can motivate me by reviewing my work. thanks again!

[Happy hours]

I saw a honesty and fairness with the words....lovely writing :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for review. :-)

[Mayank]

nicely written, too much agony...

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for your review

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad journey into love disappointment. When we bleed. It mean we are still alive. Strong emotions and thoughts in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ayesha gupta]

i used "bleeding" in the sense that some words hurt us so much. that they literally stab our heart causing the pain (bleeding).
your interpretation for bleeding was a nice one.. positive one. thanks for your review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[hardeep sabharwal]

I can feel the emotions here, as I have faced such situation, good going ayesha keep it up

[ayesha gupta]

thanks :) and if such situation happened with you, then m sorry for making you remember it.

[hardeep sabharwal]

its ok dear friend,, life is a teacher and we learn many things,, so good and bad both are learning phases of life,

[ayesha gupta]

yep. you are right.

[Emily]

Love the wording! Great job!

[ayesha gupta]

thanks. :)

[stars are far]

thats so relatable for me,. i loved this agoney expressed here.. well done

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for your review.. it feels great when people like your work. :-)

[stars are far]

yeah iknow and its always my pleausre :)

[Surya pradha]

i absolutely agree with your note. liked your description of emotions. keep it up.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks surya, for reviewing my work. :-)