Ashes of Love

its a imagination about one-sided love

Ashes of memories, left with me,
when you were sixteen and i fifteen,
you cared for me, so kind you were,
but i misunderstood our frienship for love.
i am stupid, i must confess;
for i had desired,
the things i didnt get.
if i had to blame,
there is no one, except me,
because you didnt knew what i feel.
you were so perfect as a friend,
it was me who puzzled things.
now you are far, m left with this,
the ashes of love, almost kill.
you will be always in my heart,
i will carry till death,
these ashes of love.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

At first, all things look very gentle even the faces of lovers so "kind" but, we always forget in love that we can`t judge at the first meeting how kind the people are. We come to know them with time and time dawns on us to show us the mirror of their heart. And, this`s the very most thing.. we`re all caged in love because we`re failed to judge it at first. To me, this`s called "Infatuation" which attracts us to the beats of love but the truth is ... the love always seemed very "BRUTAL", "UNKIND" at first and to have the real drops of love, you have to be "UNKIND" at first. And, with time.. you find your true love because true love can only be found "BY TIME" .. so, everything comes to your feet with time. Time`s love, sweetheart and the love`s time which never stops at one place. Time`s variable so, is the love cos, the love`s capricious.

Nice imagery!

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review.

[hardeep sabharwal]

one sided love always end this way,, but still first love is first, an emotional piece here and well written :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for your review, bhaiya. :)

[Surya pradha]

very nice, can relate to it.

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for reading and your appreciation.