My Fantasy World

here is a dream. a girl is imagining about being with her lover. romantic fantasy. enjoy.

I escape into fantasy world,
my own imagination, is now above real world.
Where i have no fears of losing love,
just you & i in this fantasy world.
We will dance, we will talk of our world,
silly dreams of dates are really fun!
Just hold my hand, dont go away,
this dream is really my happiest one.
I love the way you smile,
it takes me to cloud nine above,
the gleam in your eyes,
that shines so bright,
and lightens my little world.

Author's Note

just feel the dream, enjoy.

Reviews

[Namrata]

A light, sweet and romantic read. How we all yearn to be with that special someone ? Feeling the dream ! :D
And I don't want to sound harsh but starting each fresh line of poetry with capital initials is not an ancient idea you know, it looks better.

[ayesha gupta]

yeah , not that ancient..but it hard to type this long on simple (not qwerty.. samsung metro 2252) mobile. so, i skip off the caps and wrote all in smalls.

[Namrata]

LOL...funny excuse.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good world to escape to.
"We will dance, we will talk of our world,
silly dreams of dates are really fun! "
I liked the hope and feel of dream in your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Prakruti]

This is adorable Ayesha! Loved each line you wrote..
A perfect love letter ;)

[ayesha gupta]

:) :-D thanks.

[Surya pradha]

what a poem. describes something that we can all relate to. that's what i like about your work.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review and apraisal. :) m glad u lykd it.

[Wórdsmíth]

In love, lovers always talk `bout fantasies at all. Your poem`s seemed a verse of that which`s nicely painted in your words. Quiet romantic thoughts!

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for reviewing. :)

[Mayank]

very sweet and romantic, hope your fantasy becomes to reality soon.

[ayesha gupta]

hehe. thanx. i hope to meet him soon. :-)

[Prabha Salimath]

A perfect piece of a teenager. Yes it happens surely in that age. Beautifullly written the flow is good and no fear if loosing love. Might it be the matter of pride or fear but another face of sweet frustration.

Nicely penned.

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for your review.

[ayesha gupta]

"losing love" , i mean for the distance. distance of miles can make love weak..but in dreams , there are no distances.

[Prabha Salimath]

Agree and you are welcome.

[Happy hours]

i like reading this....nice work :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanx. its nice feeling when you get good reviews. :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

good write,
imagination of a young girl,,
very true that in world of fantasy no fear of loses,, I enjoyed reading this piece
nice job

[ayesha gupta]

thankyou sir.