" Sing "

 I hear the song from miles away.

Familiar words I'm scared to say.

  Telling me what I already know.

Yet I hold on, don't want to go.

  Just give in, you know what's right.

Surrender now, give up this fight.

  There is nothing left, it's over now.

Never coming back, there's no way how.

  Have no regrets, fix all that's wrong.

While singing out that final song...

                                    JAM

Reviews

[judith106]

Wow.. Its been awhile since I was on this site.. Thank you for your feedback

[Cathy Wattam]

This has a nice flow which could easily be put to music. Poetry and song writing are often so close and this could be either. I enjoyed it.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This has nice rhythmic flow...good meter and rhyme. I enjoyed reading this. Nice work!

[Whiskurz]

This is a very well written piece.......Whisk

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A thoughful and upbeat piece, well done, good read.