Rays

Rays

A Poem by judith106

From under my covers, that's if I peak out.
There's a small ray of hope where there used to be doubt.
If I come out slowly, will the fear stay away?
Could I find that safe place? Would I dare to stay?
I know to be careful and will take my time.
To restore my heart...Make my life mine.
                                               JAM

© 2012 judith106


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I just did the same as P.J. and have read several of your poems. And I agree with him, Charming is a good word in describing this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


read a few of your pieces and see the consistency in them...this one is charming..always warming to th heart when hope displaces doubt. Good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice! Really cute and heartfelt, really good rhyming and perfect flow. Thanks!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 18, 2012
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