Rays

From under my covers, that's if I peak out.

There's a small ray of hope where there used to be doubt.

If I come out slowly, will the fear stay away?

Could I find that safe place? Would I dare to stay?

I know to be careful and will take my time.

To restore my heart...Make my life mine.

                                               JAM

Reviews

[Michael G.]

I just did the same as P.J. and have read several of your poems. And I agree with him, Charming is a good word in describing this piece.

[Patrick]

read a few of your pieces and see the consistency in them...this one is charming..always warming to th heart when hope displaces doubt. Good write

[A poet's heart]

Nice! Really cute and heartfelt, really good rhyming and perfect flow. Thanks!