Choka no. 1

Choka no. 1

A Poem by Juan Victor
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5-7 syllabication with a 5-7-7 ending.

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A missing love is
a dominating dessert.
It is lonely and
torturous. Devastation.
Abominable.
All you want to do is leave.
We are, my love, stuck.
For I am missing you and
you're missing me. But desserts 
have oases. Hope.

© 2012 Juan Victor


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Added on September 7, 2012
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Author

Juan Victor
Juan Victor

Richmond, BC, Canada



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A Poem by Juan Victor