Hi I really enjoyed your poem. To me it was an uplifting poem to all people who maybe struggling with something in life perhaps unemployment, illness, injustice or even depression that if they just hold on something good will come along...well done .
The last stanza is my favorite... It's not the person but the circumstances that makes him bad... Patience is definitely the key thing here, the ones who wait will find the peace of life again, the darkness and pain will go away someday, they must never give up... A very positive write... Well done..
Hi I really enjoyed your poem. To me it was an uplifting poem to all people who maybe struggling with something in life perhaps unemployment, illness, injustice or even depression that if they just hold on something good will come along...well done .