Just betweem us

This is why I can't keep things in a reasonable order.

  Never go straight,

    go forward.

Stop it!

Secrets are simply that.

 You don't share them.

I sit in an orchard.

  Surrounded by secrets.

Who says go?

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Secrets are meant to be kept quiet.

[Jon Roggie]

The only ones to be shared, are those told with the words, "After I'm gone..."

[Lorry]

The great thing about writing is that we can tell secrets, ours or theirs, and noone will know if its fiction or fact.
Sharing secrets help you lose weight, half the burden etc, but we can all carry so much unnecessary baggage through life.

[Jon Roggie]

We can release the pressure by little lines, but the secrets still remain for another to reveal. Said in my best Vincent Price voice.

[Lorry]

Ha! It was Vincent Price' voice that I had in my head when I wrote my first poem, 25 years ago. If i had a voice like his, i would set every one as spoken word 😀

[Jon Roggie]

He had a great voice. He also knew when to ham it up.

[Lorry]

I bet he had no backchat when he told his kids to go to bed 😀

[Jon Roggie]

Flipping right!
He knew the monsters under the bed on a first name basis.

[Lorry]

Ha! He played most of them. A true legend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really have never understood why so many long to keep secrets...to shadow their own lives with them.
Keeping such things locked into ourselves can make our hearts feel cabin fever.
j.

[Jon Roggie]

I seem to be one of those people tell their secrets. They aren't repeated, and the weight builds. Amazing how the secrets seem to blend together.