Structural Damage

Structural Damage

A Story by Jon Roggie

If anyone knows how to be honest with a doctor,
 please let me know.

I try,
 and see their eyes glaze over.

How do you explain a ten percent increase of tremor in the left hand?

I prefer to cook,
 but I also have a few classes in my background.
I actually enjoyed math.

Medications prescribed don't do it.
  They just dull the feeling.
I do better without.

Give me a x-ray,
 and let me see.

Let me know if it is only sore muscles,
 but don't go by your technical guess.

Now,
 some might think the math bit was out of place,
  and I am losing my way.

I only know I can barely pick up a ten pound grocery bag,
  and they want me to take muscle depressants.

Rough week,
 and I get to see the doctor on Monday.

© 2018 Jon Roggie


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Gee
You get your 10 minutes, they must often guess, then it's out of the door and next one in. May as well self diagnose, internet doctors we all will be one day.



Posted 6 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

6 Years Ago

To be honest, the medical people have been good. Consistent on treatment. As far as self diagnose,.. read more
Gee

6 Years Ago

LMAO......
How do you explain your life in so few words, to a harassed doctor, who is too busy typing to look at you, that it may just be aches and pains to them, but it is a serious problem for the person who feels it.
My parents never complained about pain once, despite crippling arthritis, heart attacks and strokes, but I find complaing loudly, pointing to it and shouting ouch usually does the trick.
Yet politeness gets in the way so often. I think that all the statistics are wrong, cancer or heart disease are not the biggest killers, silence is.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Lorry

6 Years Ago

Most likely Jon. It took my doc over five years to get my bp low enough so that I wouldnt die of a h.. read more
Jon Roggie

6 Years Ago

From the x-rays, it seems I may be done in by arthritis of the neck. Shaking my head has came back .. read more
Lorry

6 Years Ago

Sympathies Jon. I always wondered what it felt like, for my mum to show pain, as she let out a sigh .. read more

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Jon Roggie
Jon Roggie

Porterville, CA



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