Last chance

Last chance

A Story by Jon Roggie

I dive out the door.
Watching the elevator dragged down,
  the music does seem  to match.
"Can't touch this."
I had to be curious about the purple gorilla.
I see the shadow.
A hand reaches out.
While conceding my fate,
 I feel a touch.
I hear a voice.
"Tag!  You're it!"

© 2018 Jon Roggie


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Fun and Light, I quite enjoyed this! He just wanted a playmate.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Did you know that Purple Gorilla is a cannabis strain lol, or it could be gawd only knows what with you Jon, that's why it's fun to read you lol. All the different directions a mind can go with this, but all places seem fun :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

6 Years Ago

I try to stick to horse tranquilizers. They wake me up in the morning! This is one which takes a .. read more
Corset

6 Years Ago

omg Placidyl, I was given that once I barely made it to the couch!
Nicely done. A sweet little vignette.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

6 Years Ago

I have no clue who came up with the original story. It is so easy to embellish!
Had to recharge my phone Jon, but I got here eventually and yes I am smiling at the ending :))

Posted 6 Years Ago


Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Bet that was great fun
Jon Roggie

6 Years Ago

The best part was always the expression after the final line!
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Yes indeed :)

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Added on August 9, 2018
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Jon Roggie
Jon Roggie

Porterville, CA



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