Now, I am being stubborn

maybe if I start quietly

I think that option has left.

It might take some effort,

 but like the spice,

  the words will flow.

Yes,

 I just put in a Dune reference.

I think Frank Herbert would appreciate it.

Does that count?

Citing sources can get touchy.

Where was I?

I try to do one simple thing.

I want you to see what I am seeing.

It escapes me.

I can describe drops of rain falling from a hummingbird's wings,

 but how do share the feeling?

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[Onlyme]

Feelings of frustration in sharing and expressing oneselves so others follow and understand. Eloquently worded and felt.