Shouting behind the silence

A Poem by Jon Roggie

Words spoken quietly,

the ones which carry.

While said in a whisper,

somehow,

the message echoes.

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those big sticks carry loud echoes..and softly spoken words can be so powerful...

If only we could learn to speak softly.
Thank you, jacob.

Jon

Sometimes the whispers need to be heard. We must pay attention. Thank you Jon for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

I am trying to decide where this could lead. It doesn't feel finished.

You could add or leave be. The poem asked questions.

To be decided.
Thank you Coyote.

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Added on May 3, 2018
Last Updated on May 3, 2018

I tend to ramble, and rarely explain myself. Take that as you will more..

Been a stretch