The story grows

While I know only a few are listening,

 I still feel I must speak a few words.

For those who have been around for awhile,

 you have had to endure my rambles concerning writing.

I know it is probably annoying.

  Random words,

    spoken with,

       at least I hope,

    a minimum of skill.

I started something.

I wrote a short work,

  one for my friend Ana.

It had touches from previous writes.

I turned into a storyteller.

Now, 

 I keep adding to the story.

I am trying to organize,

  and make for an easier read,

   but I just keep seeing various moments.

I write at the moment,

  hopefully catching typos.

When you see a moment,

  you can't let it escape.

I look at my story,

 and it keeps changing.

I can only try to share the words.

Reviews

[Lorry]

And that can be said for why most of us write Jon. My writing is most certainly broken fragments, of a picture too big to comprehend, written in the hope that one day, I shall make more sense of some f the bigger picture than can currently fit in my thoughts.
We can but hope.

[Jon Roggie]

What is fun is the stories match. Granted, they are still coming from the same mind, but some of this is years apart.

[Lorry]

Writing, like life can be a jigsaw. We don't know how the pieces fit, but are pleasantly surprised when they do. :)

[Jon Roggie]

Side note. Apparently my DNA is showing up Scottish. Also Jamaican.

[Lorry]

Us Scots do get around :)

[Jon Roggie]

I have to ask your forgiveness for a recent review. You should see it soon.

[Lorry]

Havent read it yet, but no forgivenes required, I assure you.