Well, I only know one of you guys, so I would probably offend one or both if I were to guess who the sweet part and "sour" parts were. But I will say that this is a wonderful collab, and that's coming from someone who avoids collabs like the plague.
The last line really speaks to the reader, making them want to read it again and again.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
This is one where comments back and forth seemed to match. Conversation shared, and with permiss.. read moreThis is one where comments back and forth seemed to match. Conversation shared, and with permission. I wish I could claim the last line, but to be true, the words came from Shannon, often shy, ignoring her rightful due.
7 Years Ago
Also, I was the sour, even if I stuck to the bourbon and coke.
7 Years Ago
He likes to pretend to be sour. More like refreshing.
Thank you for your kind words. That la.. read moreHe likes to pretend to be sour. More like refreshing.
Thank you for your kind words. That last line is...my bain as a writer.
opposites attract....sweetness mixed with cold hard reality...
each gives a little...has another drink.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Since you have been involved with one of my schemes,
you realize I will turn a conversation i.. read moreSince you have been involved with one of my schemes,
you realize I will turn a conversation into a write.
Granted, I let the participants know.
Shannon added the wistful flavor. I was the bitter.
7 Years Ago
That's a great way to describe it. In this case I think we alternate.