Tub of Ice Part I

Tub of Ice Part I

A Story by Jon Roggie

One of those nights,
 and now I soak my hands 

Some would rather choose their head.

One of the two needs more attention.

I find myself filled with doubt.

Tried to avoid this kind of responsibility.
 Didn't seem to work.

She sleeps quietly,
 and waking will bring more questions.

I let the chill sink.

© 2017 Jon Roggie


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Took the "bull by the horns" did ya? Responsibility does call for the hard choices, hard actions. I'm moving on to the Part II.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

I need to start working on organizing my writes. This is a continuation of "One of those days." No.. read more
Ah, Jon. Heart breaking. But beautiful, in its realness.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

A touch of realism adds to the story. Added a few.

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Jon Roggie
Jon Roggie

Porterville, CA



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