Where was I?

Where was I?

A Poem by Jon Roggie

One of the problems with stories,
 at least one I run into,
 is the teller loses their place.

Honestly,
 did you think we had this on some kind of card?

   Wait.
    That would be a good idea.

Anyway,
 telling a story is not always planned.

You stroll through it,
  seeing what you might see.

Sharing it....

  Now,
    there is another story.

© 2017 Jon Roggie


Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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How true that is, you stroll through it. :)
and it's never the same twice, it grows each time

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

There is always another detail to add. Part of the fun.
Papaya

7 Years Ago

yeah, totally agree!
This actually brought a smile to my face. Good play with words, and good adding to the point of the story. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

Glad I gave you a smile. There are too few of those in the world.
I do eventually try to get.. read more
and when one story leads to another, they get mixed up and the reader finds a forest of confusion...hard to find the way out...

but sometimes good stories just lead to better understanding of life...and allow us to find what we need out of what we read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

Part of the reason I leave the words vague. What I write will always be seen a different way. I th.. read more

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Jon Roggie
Jon Roggie

Porterville, CA



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