Guitar with no strings

Guitar with no strings

A Poem by Jon Roggie

Someone might try to take the music away,
 but you don't have to let them.

You still have an instrument to play.

You know where to place your finger on the neck,
 and anyone watching can see you going through the chords.

Most,
 they might be amused at the sight,
  but some watch.

They listen to the song you are playing.

© 2017 Jon Roggie


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A guitar with no strings makes music of the silence.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

I have to agree with Tbear. This one needs more work. Still, I like the premise.
Corset

7 Years Ago

So do I :-D
This has great promise.. you have me engaged until the last stanza...it doesnt feel complete... i understand what you want to convey..but it needs rewording.. polishing.... write on...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

I see what you are saying. I am debating on changes. I am thinking something between the third, an.. read more

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Added on January 23, 2017
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Jon Roggie
Jon Roggie

Porterville, CA



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