Back to music

For those who have put up with me,

  yes, here I go again.

It is all about telling a story.

The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald.

Gordon Lightfoot wrote a story.

For those unfamiliar,

  look it up.

This goes back to how you write.

You learn a rhythm.

Don't force it.

Let it flow.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

I love this. Let it flow, unforced. There are those who believe in re-editing a million times. I am pretty sure you are similar to me -- most poems are the only draft, with the occasional re-edit for a typo.

[iamshadowine]

i really like the plot of your poem....i think in the second line instead of 'hear' it should've been 'here'....
overall it was amazing! :D keep writing :D

[Jon Roggie]

Nice catch. One of these days I will stop using first drafts!