Elder voice

Advice?

Groan.

When will you realize?

  I just ramble.

Sure,

  some of it manages to make sense,

    but I think it was just an accident.

Now,

  after the disclaimer I will listen.

Might even say something with a bit of meaning.

Reviews

[Corset]

If you listen , every random and not so random person you come in contact with has a message , however bizarre it may seem, there will be future or past relevance, I read a book once that this poem reminds me of and it was called The Celestine Prophecy, have you read it?

[Jon Roggie]

No. I will have to look it up, but I believe you can learn something from everyone. All you have to do is pay attention.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we are so often told in critiques how to write...but those who do that don't know what is churning inside, nor how it needs to come out...we are all who we are with the pen...and meaning is relative...

i like this one very much.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you jacob. I don't feel we can ever know what is really meant by another's words. Everyone has their own view of the words. It can be amazing, and sometimes terrifying.