Phases

Each a little different,
  showing another side.

Apparently,
  this one is more vague than others,
     one line clear.

Now,
  not this is anything new,
    just something to explore.

Tortoise is on another journey.

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

I love your pieces because I don't understand them! That's what makes them remarkable! People can interpret them in so many different ways, which means it can also touch people's hearts in so many different ways! Trying to figure out the bits and pieces is really fun! Sometimes it brings back old memories, making your poem have a strong meaning to me! Excellent job on this one! Thanks for sharing :)

[Jon Roggie]

I must admit, this made me cry. You grasped the method. Thank you.

[Cool Girl]

You're very welcome.
And thank you for writing these beautiful pieces :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the more slowly we explore, the more we find, endure, and savor...
and like a poem, the vague one is most fascinating to explore, and to fill in the blanks.

jacob

[Jon Roggie]

I still think I just ramble.

Thank you, sir.