How I do start a story?

Who do I focus on?

Started with the calloused tongue,
  used like a snake.

Only deceptive comfort.

Taken up by a victim,
  learning all the tricks,
    and gaining a shallow revenge.

Is that enough?

A story never has a true beginning,
  or end.

There is always a story,
  waiting to start again.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

almost signs of a passive agressive behavior....that shallow revenge of the calloused tongue...gets in the digs, then has regrets...

trying to restart the story with a less subtle theme...and a more agressive wording.