Rubbing the sand from my eyes

a smile to see you awake,
   hoping.


what can I create,
  passing between worlds,
   barely touching?

each stopping point a lash across the back,
  each bringing a single tear.

another touch of reality

Reviews

[Laura Lynn]

a lash across the back! each bringing a single tear?! I will try to remember that! What a great image, very motivating!

[Jon Roggie]

a bit dramatic, but, yeah. Stevie Ray playing. Fits the words.