How can I tell a story?

I keep trying,
  but so much is unseen.

Words only carry a bit of the message,
   unable to manage the weight of a glance.

I wish I could explain it better,
  but how can I?

How do you try and explain emotions,
  each seen for a drawn out moment?

Reviews

[Renée]

You use a different eye… ( ;

[Jon Roggie]

I just want to tell a story by the fireside.

[Renée]

then set the stage, Dear Tortoise.. give us fire..and the story.. listening ( :