I miss shimmerbliss

How many miss someone?
  Someone who encouraged your writing.
    
Some pause,
  and show up after awhile.

Others are just gone.

I can't say they left,
  because I still remember them,
   and their words.

You were one of the first words of encouragement,
  and I cherish each one.
 
Time has past,
   others respond.

Still,
  I do miss you.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

I like this. It's true. There are some people who leave we miss, and wish would return. One thing I would say, is flipping from them to you within such a short poem you might want to reconsider.:)

[Jon Roggie]

I see your point, and I added a couple of lines. There will always be those we miss.

[Lyn Anderson]

I think it reads more clearly now, even with the flip.

[Jon Roggie]

I do ramble!

[Lyn Anderson]

Ramble isn't the way I would describe it. Sometimes you are too economical with your words -- the small expansion works.

[Jon Roggie]

Fine. I will try to spend a few more words. ;)

[Renée]

I miss her too ! I keep her on my list hoping she will return..

[Jon Roggie]

You too! I think she may have been part of how you, and the flutterby, and I met.

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:: wish i could join you two in missing her... :P :: i was friends with her once but soon i managed to piss her off quite badly... and she reciprocated... lol... :P

[Renée]

lol @ flutterby !! I can't imagine you doing that !? lol .. Mr. Tortoise I met you through flutterby.. Shimmerbliss was long gone.. ( :

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:: lol... now my lips are sealed, my fairy... i've already said too much... :P

[Jon Roggie]

I knew it! Other than the tiff between flutterby. ;)

[Renée]

lol !!!!!!