To write with passion

Excuse me,
  I said that wrong.

The writing is about passion.

Trying to share a look shared,
  eyes only for each other.

Attempting to tell,
  if only for a moment,
    the feel of chapped lips,
      and a quick touch of your tongue.

The rest not to share,
  except for your delicate touch,
     and the look in your eyes.

Reviews

[captain]

yes, to write with passion on which I now lack, great to have read this...

[Jon Roggie]

My pleasure to give the opportunity.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes there seems to be more passion in the words we write, more than what there is in our real lives...there we imagine passion...in real poetry, we write it.

[Jon Roggie]

Maybe part of the reason I write these kind of poems. I keep trying to share those certain moments. Thank you, sir.

[Briana O'Connor]

This is a very interesting expression of passion. This is definitely not what I was expecting when I read the title. Which is a good thing. You threw me for a loop, and I love being surprised :D Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed the read.

[Jon Roggie]

Maybe I mislead with the title, but I can't help but feel it carries through. Glad you liked it!