A partial glimpse

Words caught in the static,
  partial visions,
   rest to be imagined.

Provoking thoughts,
 wondering about the meaning.

Conclusions made,
  based on a bit between the electronic snow.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Feels like part to the other one I just read.

[Jon Roggie]

I do tend to fixate on a theme.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is interesting...it makes me think that as poets, we write many words, but what about those words that are caught in the blizzard of thought, but never quite reach the ground...

very cool, literally and figuratively...."electronic snow blurring the screen...the meaning falling deep"

[Jon Roggie]

I will run with a simple idea, but once in awhile, I have to stop.
Words just don't feel right.