A slow fall

One so painful.

Watching,
   and waiting.

Nothing to be done.

Inevitable.

As the days progress,
  always the cloud,
   taking a few rays from the sun.

Each moment the fall continues. 

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Lost love, death, inevitability. A very strong emotional piece.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you. Best way I know to write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

watching and waiting...but she doesn't notice me....her sun warms me, yet I fall farther away from her.


inevitable.

[Jon Roggie]

Exactly. We can only watch.