A face for others

To draw attention,
  something which brings me to a standstill.

Words spoken with bare attention,
  but sometimes,
    someone notices.

To play along the same line,
  it would be easy.

Just not right.

Words should flow,
  not be forced.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Words should flow,
not be forced.

Loved the message in this one, Jon.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you. Still trying to get the hang of this writing thing. Maybe in a few more decades....

[Pryde Foltz]

I think you got it:)

[Lucid Dreamer]

I really like this poem! Good work!

[Jon Roggie]

Merely a ramble. Thank you.

[Kurayami]

A really thoughtful poem. I especially like the last three stanzas.

~Kurayami

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you. I simply feel the write should flow. -Jon.