Before I sleep

i must dream
one of my own choosing

an image
for a moment to savor

a time of bitter sweet
the hands struggle to complete

penetrate the darkness
allowing a quiet retreat

Reviews

[Corset]

when dreams are paramount to well being, when dreams come true, this poem expresses a desire to make your own version of dreams come true and I think that's beautiful ;)

[Jon Roggie]

as long as everyone gets to join along!