Image

wake in silence
rush to the mirror
will they like me?

What is wrong with this picture?

hesitant
avoiding attention

Can you not see it?

stay quiet
no one will tease me

Unacceptable.

No one should feel so alone.
Especially,
a child.

Reviews

[John Anderson]

well composed and crafted piece of work

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Some powerful images conjured here.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you, sir. Maybe teach the niece the German language..

[Sami Khalil]

A very good write on the subject of image especially to a child who is trying to establish it daily...Bravo................

[Jon Roggie]

Now, if only to get her to break out of her shell. Thank you, sir.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).....................

[AKMaleeke]

I think we have a sense to inquire if people will accept us (including myself). Very relatable poem which attracts me to reading. I would have liked to read more details. Good stuff

[Jon Roggie]

I usually keep details to the minimum. Give the broad strokes of the picture, and let the reader think of the detail. Also, thank you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the worst is when a child feels judged by other kids, if he or she feels different somehow...because being that young and impressionable...it can really damage the self-esteem and confidence.

powerful piece, Jon.

[Jon Roggie]

Still watching the outcome. Thank you, sir.

[Corset]

Its an image many people live with everyday, especially children, I think you've touched on a very serious issue that everyone can relate to.

[Jon Roggie]

Another inspired by a niece, minus the mirror. I did try to restrain myself. Thank you.