Gather round the fire

Don't worry.

You don't have to get too close.

Bit of warmth,
  while passing in the night.

Watch the eyes across the coals.

Grown long cold.

Author's Note

I don't like this. Normally, just scrap it at this point.

Reviews

[Photochick]

nice words, nice phrases...

[Jon Roggie]

This is one I normally toss because of the tone, but the second read.... Arggh!

[Photochick]

I think it has some potential but if you aren't feeling it...

[Corset]

I feel so sad for cold eyes one should never be without a light in their eyes, whether it's a glint of sun or the reflection of fire, eyes should never be empty. Don't scrap this.

[Jon Roggie]

One that ran away from me. Thank you!