I want to fly

I want to fly

A Poem by Jon Roggie

Simple request.

Let me be.

Each visit is an anchor.

I know you mean well,
  but you hold me down.

Let me play.

I can only dance with dreams.
 
So,
  let me fly with the dragons.

© 2013 Jon Roggie


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:: i support your perspective completely... very well said, mister tortoise...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

11 Years Ago

Directed a bit more to family members. (;
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11 Years Ago

:: ah... i see... :P
'I can only dance with dreams.'


in a second i'll spirit away! this seemed to be about freedom, about not being tied down in anyway. i liked the phrasing here, short strong statements on the canvas of the page. fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

11 Years Ago

Thank you. Also, you nailed it.

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Jon Roggie
Jon Roggie

Porterville, CA



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