Almost redemption

Hurts.
Each time.

Tears blinding,
  trying to obscure sight.

Always find your way.

Back to shelter.

Each time a bit stronger.

Soon,
  you may trust yourself.

Redemption,
  without hesitation.

Reviews

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~ i am in awe of your understanding of life... and...of course... the way you express it... "redemption, without hesitation" is an expression that is epic... ~ what a brilliant piece of work... ~ completely inspirational in every possible way... superbly written... this has to be one of your top ten pieces... (imho)...

[CS]

All those time breaking really make you stronger. At least, that is the hope. One day, it will not hurt anymore and there will be no need to seek safety. I find I have "almost" reached that point a few times. Nice work on this, Jon.

[Jon Roggie]

I tend to be the shelter. Shows up in one like this. Thanks!