The Simple Words

Never know when a phrase will catch.

Simple words bypass others,
  but plant seeds.

Mind is a fertile ground.

Hope the flowers take root.

Hate to see the weeds take over.

Reviews

[Corset]

mind the expansion joints, those weeds love to pop up between the cracks! :) Your poetry remind me of two others here of so few words but what they say and the way they say them could have a universe inside them, Diego Paz and Emily Burns, if you are not familiar with them, I think you'd like ;)

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you for the tip. I just feel more natural using fewer words. If I can make somebody stop and think or feel, with maybe ten words? Yeah, I can live with that.

[Corset]

I subcribed so I could read more of you. :)

[Jon Roggie]

Odd timing. I was just reading one of yours.

[Corset]

Thank you for that :)

[asdarkeyesclose]

'Mind is a fertile ground.'

i liked the simplicity of this, minds need to be fed and watered much like flowers, fresh challenges inspire and take us in new directions and we definitely need those challenges. fantastic.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you. This is one that just felt finished.

[Holly Mason]

words that are truly enjoyed
to the point no mess around kinda write
love the content...dang weeds
thank you for sharing

[Jon Roggie]

My pleasure.

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~ brilliantly expressed...
~ i hope too...