Fragrence of the morning dew
A Poem by
Jon Roggie
Just a keepsake.
Something to remember,
day to day,
help to be strong.
Rain fell over night,
cleaned the air,
washed the streets
On a new morning,
for a moment,
tale a breath.
© 2013 Jon Roggie
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Such a beautifully soothing piece. I just love the morning after it rains. Just, the last line says,"Tale a breath." I'm sure you meant to put "take".
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks. Morning smell is invigorating. Leads to a bit of creativity. Was surely tale not take. T.. read more Thanks. Morning smell is invigorating. Leads to a bit of creativity. Was surely tale not take. Thanks again.
'Something to remember,
day to day,'
clean, fresh, the new day with all its possibilities cleansed by the rain. a nicely structured piece. fantastic.
Posted 11 Years Ago
'Something to remember,
day to day,'
clean, fresh, the new day with all its possibilities cleansed by the rain. a nicely structured piece. fantastic.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you. This was a pleasant write.
What a lovely fragrance...and a refreshing write..
Posted 11 Years Ago
What a lovely fragrance...and a refreshing write..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Belated thanks, my friend.
11 Years Ago
my pleasure ( :
~ wow... that is an empowering image... ~ i need to do this... to take each day at a time... and stay strong... this is how i live...
Posted 11 Years Ago
~ wow... that is an empowering image... ~ i need to do this... to take each day at a time... and stay strong... this is how i live...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
It is a lot easier to notice the wrong. I try to work at spotting the rest. Thanks princess.
11 Years Ago
~ yes, you're right... and...the privilege is all mine... :)
Not a typo at the end.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Not a typo at the end.
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Added on February 3, 2013
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Author
Jon Roggie Porterville, CA
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