Started with a doodle on a bathroom stall

Doing the necessary.

Not quite right in the head.

Why not?

Happen to have a marker in my pocket.

"When was the last time you were loved?'

Quick joke,
  with some underlying feeling.

Crude jokes,
  of course they appeared quick.

Favorite pub,
  of course I returned.

Then I saw it once,
  and then again.

Some cheeky b*****d.

He stole my line.

Simple picture of a puppy,
  nuzzling a child's knee.

Someone took it the right way.

Now, people wonder.

Smile.

"I just love little puppies."

Reviews

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~ am not sure i'm reading this piece as intended... but it speaks to me of the return of and the return to innocence... an intriguing piece of poetry that is rather thought-provoking...

[Jon Roggie]

Bit whimsical today. Birthday. I was just hoping to show how even the odd word can have some effect.

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~ ooh la la... happy birthday, monsieur jon... :D
~ where's the champagne ? ... it better be dom perignon (i hope i got the spelling right; i've only had it once)... :P

[Jon Roggie]

Working man, my dear. Few drinks, and back tomorrow. As far as, dom, over rated. Now a nice Chopin, or Stoli....

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~ oh, no... i thought you'd be partying... glad i'm not missing out on much as far as dom is concerned... am glad it's overrated... ~ seems you know a lot about champagne... shall check those out virtually for info (thank you, google)... and actually when i have the money... :P

[Jon Roggie]

Vodka, my friend.

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~ oh... oops... :P ~ i'm a white wine zombie... i need to get myself a decent education in vodka... :P