Another day

So nice
  I can feel you

Are you trying?

Yes
  remember how long it was with you

Not this time
You need this

I know
I need you

Tomorrow is another day

Reviews

[paparapapa]

This poem definitely made me think. And yes, I'm still thinking. :)) There's something about how you chose those words and put them together that makes me really curious. I really want to read your mind right now. =)) Maybe it's something deep, maybe it's something shallow, maybe it's something that only you would understand, or maybe it's something everybody would understand except me (now i feel dumb, haha), but I guess it's totally up to the readers how they'll interpret this. And I guess that's what adds to the beauty of this poem - mystery. Great job. :)

[Jon Roggie]

This was a bit different for me. I felt I had to show there was more than one voice involved. Also, I tend to leave my writing a bit vague. I want anyone who reads my writing to have a new window open. Thanks!

[paparapapa]

Oh cool! Write more. :)