something to hold

something to hold

A Poem by Jon Roggie

eyes are starting to dim

Dreams are there

draw the blanket close
grasp the warmth

Flights of fancy
 only the eyelids hold them back

just a bit
close my eyes for a second

Grab hold!

© 2012 Jon Roggie


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the world of sleep is the intuitive world where our subconscious sorts out all our problems, i liked the structure to this, very simple, everything said in a few words. fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Jon Roggie

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I just feel comfortable keeping it simple.
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~ beautiful... just so beautiful...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Jon Roggie

11 Years Ago

Thanks! This may have came about being by a precocious niece and a faithful old dog.
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11 Years Ago

~ oh, how amazing... i have a precocious nephew so i know... :)

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Jon Roggie
Jon Roggie

Porterville, CA



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