Thin ice

This is not the smartest move I could make.

Still,
  breath leaving trails behind me.

Gliding along with a maniac's glee.

Cracking the ice as I skate pass.

Each touch,
  I see the splinters.

Loving life while I skate over the thin ice.

Reviews

[Jo March]

Lovely, so simple yet says so much

[Tex]

Another wonderful write.

I have to lean how to do this... clean, sparse, writing you do. The clarity is so refreshing.

Love it

[Jon Roggie]

Thanks again. I just write as if I was talking to someone.

[Tex]

well it is working BIG time for you! love your stuff