Drops of rain

So sudden,
  but it took so long.

Watching the rose.

Bloom,
  then slowly fade.

Walk outside.

Mind and soul are numb.

Just want to be with you.

As I turn my face to the sky,
  tears starting to flow,
I feel the drops of rain.

Reviews

[Tex]

you are the MAN. I love your sparse style. this is 2 for 2. after only viewing 2 of you pieces I am thinking... this guy has something special here. Well said "less is more" direct, clean, unambiguous.

I just loved it.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you. I feel more natural when I keep it simple. I do tend to leave things up to interpretation. It makes it more interesting when you see what different people come away from it with. Thanks again!