Simple Dream

Simple Dream

A Poem by JustWantLove

Each time I see you, hear you,
I dare not blink to miss you,
And hope that you will stay;
Each moment that you're there,
I wish it were that way;
Imperfect world, a shady life,
So much opposing us each day,
All that I want is be with you,
Without tomorrow or the past,
But just to love you for today.

© 2010 JustWantLove


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You are a poet and you have the feeling
plus the knowledge to make it work.
You have written a poem here that touches
my heart---- so, be my friend that I may write
more of you and you shall never part.
---- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it! The longing in your words conveys fantastically and I love the way the words flow but don't drag down the poem by being too cluttering and confusing~ Bravo!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 16, 2010
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* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart. Real, daring, blunt .. human. I am..in a.. more..

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