For you Each minute lives All seconds counted, still Through faith, I've followed .. I Stars I've counted, wished upon ..say I do, I By Heaven's will; counted my luck need you, just And thunderbolts , bewildered me complete me! In awe by dreams have struck, my ................ Journey is to find you, be ... you ........... Are my maker of sweet dreams ...... In random search I seek to .. See ... no hate but kindness . Blush in glee, for you . Life happened, all . In lieu, for You . I am, be . Just . Free . Me .
I love the format of this poem. I really think it gives the poem a little something extra. (It must have taken forever to perfect it). I agree Valentine's Day should be every day but unfortunatley the realities of life sometimes over take the romantic fairy tales. Another greta piece.
The message between the lines is great and I totally agree that Valentines Day is everyday. But in connection to your art and my realization, it is quite meticulous to make Valentines Day everyday. Yes, it's difficult but possible. :)
Baeutiful poem. I espically loved the format int he heart shape. It's very unique. I would have never have thought to do something like that. I love your outlook that the person you are writing to completes you. Lovery. Beautiful work.
This is amazing! I don't even know what to say, you set it out beautifully and even though the first time I read it I couldn't really understand all of it, once I'd read over it again I could see it, truly beautiful! And you are absolutely right, Valentines Day should be everyday!! Once again, well done! Amazing poem!
* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart.
Real, daring, blunt .. human.
I am..in a.. more..