Daily Romance

Daily Romance

A Poem by JustWantLove
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                                                     For you
                                           Each minute lives
                                     All seconds counted, still
                                 Through faith, I've followed                            .. I
                              Stars I've counted, wished upon                 ..say I do, I
                           By Heaven's will; counted my luck           need you, just
                          And  thunderbolts , bewildered  me            complete me!
                           In awe by dreams have  struck, my             ................
                            Journey is to find you,  be ... you                  ...........
                              Are my maker  of sweet  dreams                    ......
                                 In  random  search  I  seek to                         ..
                                    See ...  no  hate but kindness                     .
                                        Blush  in  glee,  for  you                      .
                                             Life  happened, all                       .
                                                  In lieu, for You                    .
                                                       I am, be                      .
                                                            Just                  .
                                                               Free         .
                                                                   Me   .

© 2010 JustWantLove


Author's Note

JustWantLove
..Valentines Day is everyday!

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I love the format of this poem. I really think it gives the poem a little something extra. (It must have taken forever to perfect it). I agree Valentine's Day should be every day but unfortunatley the realities of life sometimes over take the romantic fairy tales. Another greta piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This was beautiful and I loved the format. :) You did a great job with this and I am glad that I made it over to read it.

xxoxx

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it...did you align the form or is that a program.. ?either way the poem is good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The form... is beautiful. I loved this. Not too sappy. A perfect Valentine's Day piece, or like you stated, an everyday poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so creative and...well, amazing. Great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A hopeless romantic I can relate to that

Posted 14 Years Ago


OH! Beautiful ART! As well as the poem. :D

The message between the lines is great and I totally agree that Valentines Day is everyday. But in connection to your art and my realization, it is quite meticulous to make Valentines Day everyday. Yes, it's difficult but possible. :)

Great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


woah, thats so cool! haha :) awesome poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


Baeutiful poem. I espically loved the format int he heart shape. It's very unique. I would have never have thought to do something like that. I love your outlook that the person you are writing to completes you. Lovery. Beautiful work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is amazing! I don't even know what to say, you set it out beautifully and even though the first time I read it I couldn't really understand all of it, once I'd read over it again I could see it, truly beautiful! And you are absolutely right, Valentines Day should be everyday!! Once again, well done! Amazing poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


grate poem
amazing formating
:)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart. Real, daring, blunt .. human. I am..in a.. more..

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