Expensive Truth

Free-verse; Passion at peak, expression of uneasiness!

 'You're wrong! The  strength of my heart
 Is  as  solid  as a  rock of  earth; my  life is
 Brighter than  the sun itself  and aura of
 My  soul,  sickens  with  health, to  spear
 All  innocence for all  and give the gift of
 Life, my heart is fire of the bluest flames
 Sheds  hope to  gleaming hearts in strife'

I won't be silent for truth in vain is pain
Blood  storms through life in me for  you
It bursts my veins and steers them blue
In dire need, for ecstasy I  heed  of  truth
Of my  existence and of  breath I've died
The silhouette of dreams exists in  plays
And   poetry  of   tongues  I  speak  inside

You  are my  cure! A drug  I seek in days
I live and wither at the height of passion
That  I  give`; with  strain and  pleasure
Hearts fulfilled through fantasies and be
Only  through  you  I'm  visionary,  true
In hopes  and dreams  I am  of  You, I see!

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Incredible format and very powerful, passionate words. The final stanza is a near tour de force. ' Blood storms through life in me for you .. It bursts my veins and steers them blue '

Well done, my friend.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Visually symmetrical, this poem is not only striking to the eye but striking to the mind as well. I could feel the potency of your words, as if they were vibrating off the very screen.

"Blood storms through life in me for you
It bursts my veins and steers them blue"

Absolutely stunningly beautiful!

Linda Marie

[Theresa]

Deep and powerful. Loved every line it all flowed perfectly together. You really have a way with words and you turn everything you write into a beautiful piece of art.

[Katie]

The first complete stanza was stunning. Everything went so well together. It was such a deep and meaningful write. Amazing, as usual :)

[Cassandra D.]

this was a wonderful and powerful poem.
I enjoyed reading it :)

[Sarah]

Wow that all I can say it strong as it really good it also seems to strike you at the begining

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. So many strong line in your poem. I like it all. Ending was excellent.
Coyote

[deeps]

This is so wonderful!
I liked this write alot.

[Dev]

"with strain and pleasure
Hearts fulfilled through fantasies and be
Only through you I'm visionary, true
In hopes and dreams I am of You, I see!"

Deep & full of vivid emotion !! Good Write !!

[Brokensoul]

Very philosophical and enlightening.