Thank You

Thank You

A Poem by JustWantLove
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To any and all readers, this is a personal reflection, a shadow of invisibility speaking of truth...

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There was a time when pain, was pain.
From  hurt  to  bruises   and then  rain.
Hail  crushed my  hopes,  impeded  life.
Future   prevailed  and   fate   in  sight.
All  blessings  to  you all who killed me.
New life has  risen through the storms.
Only  by  Love  I say this now and still.
I'm still  alive,  I bask  in Heaven's will.

© 2010 JustWantLove


Author's Note

JustWantLove
This goes to those awesome people/writers/poets who have been positive in my writing time here, who have responded in kind with wonderful reviews/comments/messages of inspiration and have helped to maintain the joyful outlook on life and being good people overall! Thank you!

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Can sense the silver lining amidst the clouds.
Only by Love I say this now and still.
I'm still alive, I bask in Heaven's will.
Loved these lines! Cheers !

Posted 14 Years Ago


A outstanding poem. I could feel the disappointment in the beginning. A victory in your words at the end. I like the ending a lot. Last two lines were excellent .
Coyote


Posted 14 Years Ago


great poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


The dedication is wonderful. :] My favorite line in this piece is "All blessings to you all who killed me," because it is so unexpected to bestow blessings upon those who do harm. Of course, in writing, those who critique the worst are those who usually make the writer better in the end, so it makes perfect sense.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Heavenly...simply, divine.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a very lovely poem.
I liked how you added little rhymes at the end of a few lines.
This was a pretty nice poem :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is lovely. People who put you down are always negative impacts and it is always nice to befriend those who will help boost the spirit.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 24, 2010
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* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart. Real, daring, blunt .. human. I am..in a.. more..

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