The Meaning of Life

You know who you are!

Birth
You
Death


(... I wrote this for my own sake;
In my own mind, dream-like;
Only three words, they are meant
To inspire the reader and provoke
Their own reasons;
All comments, are your own;
They are your own answers.
Whatever road You take,
Is and will be your life!  ...)

Author's Note

'You' - the guiding star at night for life; The glory destined to fulfill and sought; You gave me life and dreams, removed all worries; You are my Queen, my bride, my ...

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Brevity is sometimes everything .. and this almost cuts it, but .. maybe there could have been just two more lines .

However, your meaning's very clear and really very beautiful.

[Helen Crutchett]

Something to ponder. Simple words hiding a mountain of meaning.
Good job.

Helena

[Tate Morgan]

It may be true but it speaks of too few No love no life no children no strife .It misses a few things that make life worth living
tate

[Cassandra D.]

completely true!
It even gave me goosebumps after reading the line "death"... O_O

[Coyote Poetry]

Simple and very true.
Coyote

[Taylor H.]

simple but deep. It reminds me of the poem I wrote. I dont post my poetry on here but I like reading it. Great job!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is certainly very thoughtful and deep.
The way with you have described the three stages of karma is exceptional.
Specially, the most significant stage "YOU"
Very well written.

[Luna]

Very short but yet one of the most true poems out there. Sometimes people forget that there are only 3 stages in life and they waste their mot important one on things that just ruin their life all together.