Irresistible Dreams

One. Forever. You. I. We. Are.

(..destination: life..)

One  universe ,  one  star,  one  life
In  sandy  beaches ,  sunrise ,  you
An angel's  breath ,  aroma ,  skies
Through  ocean  swam to  say I do
United,   joined  together,  dreams
Forever whole; Fire, water: steam
Look  in  my  eyes,   it  is  all  true.
Be  one  in  you,  eternally,  for all
In sunset's bliss, and  in star's  kiss
You're  mine,  and I belong to you!

Author's Note

Everyone has a dream; are we alive to attempt and fulfill it?

Reviews

[Brokensoul]

Very very romantic and passionate !

[Vember Judgement]

This is the kind of piece I wish I was able to write. Love in purity...

[Chirinos20]

A beautiful poem. thanks for sharing!!

[Gandré]

I like your urge for oneness and how you identify yourself with the universe with earth and with her, this war beautiful and positive, joyful and that's poetry we need. Too many write (and wrote) about misery and negativity. We need to celebrate joy. Perfect, it keeps reader begging for more.

[Dressed in Poetry]

First, I am a sucker for great formatting, and this block was lovely. Definitely eye-catching from the start. It starts out in four (four sides, four corners), and then transformed into groups of threes at the beginning of the poem (universe, star, life; angel's breath, aroma, skies; fire, water, steam...) and turned into twos at the end (sunset's bliss, star's kiss; you and I), but the poem itself was about oneness, and the word "one" was invoked many times to show that. I thought all of that was amazing when put together. Great job!

[Katie]

This was so touching. The way you word things is so beautiful. This might just be one of my favorites from you.

[Cassandra D.]

this was pretty lovely.

[Buddhistboy73]

Another deeply emotional piece from you. Great stuff....

[emmajoy]

Beautifully said, beautifully formatted .. beautiful everything.

[Taylor H.]

great peom.