The End?

...maybe.

 I've pondered,
 Tossed and turned,
 I've run amock;
 Been here,
 Been there,
 And I'm still stuck;
 I've chased my dreams,
 From high to low,
 From inside-out..
 I'm still at loss;
 I've risked and blundered,
 Gave it all and stumbled;
 Have tried with all,
 With all I've got,
 Yet still somehow,
 I find ... I'm not;
 Where must I go?
 What should I do to be?
 Who's life am I to save..
 To find my love and grace?
 In spirit high,
 Yet low in hope,
 I wonder: how did it elope?
 God help me, please:
    I'm falling still!
 Please help my heart,
 When will You fill..?
 My heart, my soul,
 Do take me whole,
 I'm so imperfect,
 Still I fall..
 Just taste the world,
 That's all I crave;
 I hope that You..
    ..my soul will save!

Reviews

[jessfoundwonder]

I just got a complete Casting Crowns vibe when i read this. I'm not the religous type, but i do like seeing "Him" talked about so nicely.
Thanks for the nice reviews by the way!

[Sarah]

you really seem to help me feel what your feel it great keep writing

[deeps]

intense really! I can feel the write though.
Such powerful emotion. Only the heart can save it self.
This is well stated