a Life

My first attempted Diamante-style contraption, on the first day of the New Year.

hate
bitter, painful
hurting, haunting, hazing
lonesome, dead, subdued, detached
sweeter, hopeful, longing,
you, me
love

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Excellent poem. I agree with what Emma said.
I thought the concept worked really well....
starting off the way it did and concluding
in a positive way. A great one to start off
the new year.

Helena

[emmajoy]

Beautifully formatted, beautiful meaning. Love can conquer all.